Magic+Hour--Revising+Essay

I want you to imagine that you have a magic hour--one free of stress and obligations. One in which you have no other homework and no concerns about your job, friends, or family. You are also magically wide awake! In this magic hour, how would you revise your essay?

1) Read over your essay in its entirety. 2) Any mistakes that you find, you can fix and they will not count against you. 3) When you are finished with your read-through, flip over your essay and write three specific ways you would revise it if you had a magic hour. Do not simply state that you would revise your conclusion. **How** would you revise it? What exactly would you add, remove, or change? Use details to explain.